Plz help!

Maroof Usmani — 2003-11-23 05:50:14

Hi There. I am a new member of this group and i want help from you 

that how to reproduce the following paragraph in formal writing 

using style and register:

" Dear Pat,

 Sorry we screwed up that order. Sending plants across country is a 

risky business. Some of them just can't take the strain. Some dys I 

can't take the strain myself!. We'll send you some more plants 

sometime next week and we'll credit your account for $372."

(Scene: Your nursery sells plants not only in your store but also by 

mail order. Roday you've received a letter from Pat Sykes, 

complaining that the plants(in a $572 order) did not arrive in a 

satisfactory condition)



This is it. Plz help me and rewrite the above paragraph in formal 

english.

thnx a lot

Ma-roof